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EDIT There were some issues with the flow in dialogue concerning the speech bubbles, so I've rearranged some things. I understand also that a lot of people are having a hard time reading the smaller font on the pages on laptops and handhelds, so I've slightly increased the size of this page and will continue to use this size if the font sizes work. I've printed off some pages at high quality and they don't have the same issue with the font. So I think it goes for everyone on an individual system or device P: and I should just try to find a middle ground. I also changed the bubble style again (every page is an experiment until final edits are made for publishing) and made some of the bubbles disappear behind the panel boarders. If it works, I'll continue to try and use it 
. This comic involves a lot of talking and pages where there will be little to no dialogue. End edit
Finally have the skills to depict the Cafeteria how I really see it. It's come a long way in a couple of years. Comment discussions greatly appreciated
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Sorry that this page has taken so long. Lot of stuff happened, like my house had a gas leak and then another flood -___-. Flood happened yesterday, so that is why the page was delayed until today. Yesterday was spent cleaning up water. Next page will be submitted soon but I really need to finish up a Patreon wallpaper.
First page - Galaxy Magnolia Book 1 page 1
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. This comic involves a lot of talking and pages where there will be little to no dialogue. End edit Finally have the skills to depict the Cafeteria how I really see it. It's come a long way in a couple of years. Comment discussions greatly appreciated
. Sorry that this page has taken so long. Lot of stuff happened, like my house had a gas leak and then another flood -___-. Flood happened yesterday, so that is why the page was delayed until today. Yesterday was spent cleaning up water. Next page will be submitted soon but I really need to finish up a Patreon wallpaper.
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I'll get to the art in a moment, but I cannot begin to express how impressed I am by your fortitude. It seems like life has thrown you far more than your share of curve balls recently and it's so admirable how well you take these things in stride.
Now, onto the cafeteria. I like how you're designing this to look like an actual collegiate institute, and not a high school. In the scripts, I really got more of a high school vibe.
But looking at how everything is advertised in the cafeteria and the architecture of the building REALLY reminds me of the UC commons at my own college. Of course yours is purely original, but they do that sort of advertising at the UC and the food zoo too.
Also, I've been noticing sort of a marbled/granite texture on the floors and pillars? Is that any particular kind of stone or is it just the reflection of the neon lights? I find it really interesting and pretty. It's almost like ammolite!!
Completely unrelated to the cafeteria, I love the eyelash texture on the Tethican's eyes. It's so realistic. I feel like he's about to pop out of my computer screen and falcon punch me. Which would suck because I'm in a cafe right now and I don't want to make a scene.. again.
I don't know if this sort of humor would be appreciated or not but I totally have a raft you can borrow if you need it. *shoves brick into mouth and crabwalks away*
Now, onto the cafeteria. I like how you're designing this to look like an actual collegiate institute, and not a high school. In the scripts, I really got more of a high school vibe.
But looking at how everything is advertised in the cafeteria and the architecture of the building REALLY reminds me of the UC commons at my own college. Of course yours is purely original, but they do that sort of advertising at the UC and the food zoo too.
Also, I've been noticing sort of a marbled/granite texture on the floors and pillars? Is that any particular kind of stone or is it just the reflection of the neon lights? I find it really interesting and pretty. It's almost like ammolite!!
Completely unrelated to the cafeteria, I love the eyelash texture on the Tethican's eyes. It's so realistic. I feel like he's about to pop out of my computer screen and falcon punch me. Which would suck because I'm in a cafe right now and I don't want to make a scene.. again.
I don't know if this sort of humor would be appreciated or not but I totally have a raft you can borrow if you need it. *shoves brick into mouth and crabwalks away*